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Azumitaiko, 26 Jan 2008 06:05 am
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To Rizu: I know what you mean, and I totally agree, but Open Canvas has very few tones that I have to improvise a lot while using them. These are the smallest dots there is, and solid tones looked out of place so I didn't use those.
To MyriamD: You asked on page 4 why the symbols are suns and moons. They do have a meaning to the story, but I can't really answer that yet.
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MyriamD, 26 Jan 2008 12:45 am
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Whee
Comment virginity. Fav'd.
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nyappyTIRAMISU, 26 Jan 2008 01:06 am
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+Fav
Whoo!! I love this comic~~ ^ ^
It's not often that you find a good shoujo-ai/yuri that actually has a plot and good art! >__<;; Keep up the good work!
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Rizu, 26 Jan 2008 03:59 am
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That's really cute. XD I especially like Megumi's hair shine in the first panel. All over, really, but the first panel stood out to me.
The tone that's used for her hair seems really... chunky, though. Sort of inelegant. Something'd been bothering me about her hair this whole time, and I just realized that's what it is. Maybe smaller dots would help it look smoother? Or even a solid tone?
Totally love your art, though. <3 Beautiful line art.
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mitten, 26 Jan 2008 10:54 am
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i put her in the tube!!
MWUAHAHAHAHAHAAA!!
jp
=P
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Jude K.A. Boi, 26 Jan 2008 11:24 am
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NO! HOW DARE YOU DO THAT TO MEGUMI! lol
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magik girl, 26 Jan 2008 06:04 pm
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Agreed. Very good plot and art!
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